Each day he rose from bed at six, and made them both a cup of tea, “It’s looking cold” he might remark, or “Getting light out there I see.” He was a man of fixed routine, who liked to live predictably and somewhere far beyond his gaze stood the mighty Pyramids, memorials from a distant time: homes to pharaohs long since dead, yet provisioned for eternity.
Each weekday, as he had for years, he sat behind his office desk, working on electoral roles at the town hall office near his home, watching the names come and go, marking out the births and deaths and talked about the voting age, and far beyond this cloistered space, a river flowed inscrutable between its steep and rocky banks: becoming the Niagara Falls,witnessed by an awestruck crowd who stood and ate their sandwiches,
Every year it was the same; he planted out his vegetables, potatoes furthest from the lawn and up against the garden fence, a decent crop of runner beans. A shadow crossed the window frame, his wife was always at her chores and far away, beyond his view, a mighty iceberg broke away and started slowly on its voyage, populated by some birds, and even by a polar bear, watched from a passing ship by tourists gathered on the deck, wondering at its growling might.
On Sunday’s they might take a walk, depending on the time of year; nodding at familiar sights, or share a coffee with some friends and talk with them on this and that: exchange the news that neighbours share and far away, beyond their sight, the people of the Himalayas, respectful of life’s mysteries and shielded from the bitter cold, could raise their eyes in quiet respect and trace the mountains, carved by ice and forces from the earth below.
And in the evening, home at last, sitting together at their meal she might raise her eyes to him, and in their depths, for all to see, was all the wonder of his life: that she with gentle empathy, soft as the light from shining stars, might share with him her purest gift; a love of rare simplicity.
Please send superlatives. I’ve run out.
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This is utterly beautiful
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Ahh … Peter, what do I say to give you and this wonderful story the praise you deserve.
I am totally taken in by the whole when you with the last paragraph show love in its grandeur
and simplicity.
miriam
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The best thing I’ve read all week. (I know it’s only Tuesday but my week started last Wednesday).
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Dear Ducks, you have surpssed yourself with this. I am in tears. So beautiful! Thank you.
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Another superbly written piece by a truly gifted hand. Thank you!
Peter,
May I introduce you to Rajani, whose posted poem today struck my heart as deeply connected to yours.
https://thotpurge.wordpress.com/2019/08/26/okjokull-death-of-a-glacier/
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Thank you TioStib for pointing me to this blog. A lovely piece, Peter and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Sweet!
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So beautiful…
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Blimey, Mr ducks, this has the rhythm of a gentle poem.
Sx
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This is a marvelously composed tale, Peter, full of beauty and poignancy. I really like how you have structured each paragraph, framing the ‘mundane’ against the ‘wonderous’, and then, in your final paragraph, you pull out the truth: that love is the greatest of all gifts. Excellent!
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Exquisite! This little piece provides a glimpse into something deeply spiritual.
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Even in a quiet life one can find find things of value: love and an imagination can carry one far.
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Sooo beautiful, Peter! The tears flowed…. Thank you
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wow
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This is utterly beautiful 👍
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what a lovely comment to read first thing in the morning. Thank you 🙂
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What a simple uncluttered existence. I too am a person of fixed routine. I just move to strange out of the way [places on a whim, and in that I find adventure in my humble routines. I loved this piece. Thanks for the read. that’s how I found you.
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It sounds like a great way to find adventure. Thank you for the lovely comment 🙂
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How very lovely. I wish I were she. 🙂 🙂
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