What You Want I Am

The single truth which fed and clothed her every day since dropping out of university to embrace her new calling was to do with men. Inspired by the welcome and then depressing attentions of her classics professor, she realised she could earn enough in a decade to live the life she wanted rather than wade through a lifetime of dressing respectfully and becoming the polite and resourceful cipher her mother had become.

Most men over fifty, he had revealed, are quietly ignored and then taken for granted. They pull the cart of responsibility up and down the field of life while, over the years, the look they receive  from their wives fills with disappointment. At night, and before sleep grips them in its anonymous grasp, they might day-dream about another world and explore those fantasies which must not be disclosed. Secret identities eat at your composure and fan the wish to be free for a day or just an hour. Just one hour of being real and honest and open about who you are and that, she understood, was her calling.

For one hour and £ 250.00 she would be your co-conspirator, your recognition-oasis and soul-mate. Her composure would never be challenged or conventions shocked by any revelation. You would see in her practised eyes that whatever you were was who she wished to meet and kiss and hold and feel herself released with.

She was the practised mirror, reflecting your inner thoughts until you believed they were her own. ” Truth and fantasy are close friends ” she once said. Such was your hunger you dared to believe this was here and real. In this barren and god-forsaken landscape called a life, where beauty looks the other way, she laughed like a conspirator until you were, for that one single hour, the boy who would have dazzled in the lecture hall, or on the sports field or anywhere at all if people had only understood your worth.

With her I thought, I had found that fresh spring which flows into the stagnant pond I had become and allowing me to flourish once again in beautiful secrecy. However outlandish my requests, she always smiled and touched my arm and said, “Oh Derek, I feared no one would ask me that. You’ve bring me happy” and we shared a glimpse of this warped paradise until, so taken was she by the image I created, that it was I who had to remind her that my session was at an end.

“Come again soon my darling” she would say, and being with her was all I wished. Somehow we would find a way to be together always and forever until that is, my wife asked why I kept making these cash withdrawals every fortnight. There was a squalid argument after which I left at her request, suitcase in hand and now of no fixed address.  For the first and only time I knocked on my ladies door with out a prior appointment.

She stood there without makeup or pretence and asked me what I was doing. “My wife has thrown me out” I told her and she looked remarkably unimpressed. “Why would I be interested “she said.  “But I love you” I replied, my heart filling with panic, but again she was unimpressed. “No one is interested Derek. That is all you need to know” and with that she shut the door. She taught me something I will not forget: the truth is seldom comforting.

About Peter Wells aka Countingducks

Trying to remember what my future is
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22 Responses to What You Want I Am

  1. Peter,
    this has the “WOW” factor. heartbreaking. xx


  2. We often see in any relationship what we choose to see; be it good or evil. Always hide a bit, great or small. Rare is the moment of raw truth between two people. It is to be treasured or avoided at all costs. We are all gamblers.


  3. Very well drawn… you had me hooked from the opening line. The gut punch at the end was worth it. Great stuff…


  4. Al says:

    Forsooth! But alas, the world is populated with femmes fatales waiting to prey on our vicissitudes.


  5. 1WriteWay says:

    Here I am, with my master’s degree in English turning yellow at the edges and all I can say is, “Wow.” I feel like I should have anticipated the ending, but I didn’t. Swept along just like poor Derek. Well done, Peter!


  6. I think this prostitute should probably is wasting her wisdom.


  7. Oooh super writing. Very insightful. In the way that a scalpel brings insight. Ahhh the siren call of the fantasy.


  8. Janni Styles says:

    You always nail the emotions with such acute accuracy, it knocks my breath right out of me. Another great write, thank you! ❤ ❤ ❤


  9. araneus1 says:

    wow……….. I had to take a moment


  10. Bring me down gently, why don’t ya?


  11. elainecanham says:

    Poor old Derek. Why did she use the metaphor of a mermaid? Why didn’t she just tell him to piss off?


  12. How much would he have paid for a lie?


  13. I.. just.. you definitely know how to evoke emotion. I don’t even know what to say after that ending.


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  15. Ouch. We hear what we want to hear…


  16. Julie Buhite says:

    Chill bumps. I like this story. I think it speaks for so many. Nice job, Peter. The story was so pleasurable and familiar that it seems I read it in three seconds.


  17. Ah that dreadful feeling of being rejected and exposed. A mermaid? A fantasy? A hooker? It’s all the same ain’t it? Poor Derek! 💖 If only he knew the grass is seldom greener on the other side.


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  19. jorgekafkazar says:

    Nicely written. No other ending would work.


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