A Weekend With The Powerful

At University you could get a bit of street- cred by striking attitudes, or looking mystical and muttering quasi-profundities such as “Yellow is the heart of Green” and then looking deep into the other persons eye as if a number of prophets and mystics were lunching between your ears. Of course, most of the ladies just told you to “Keep taking the tablets” but if you struck enough poses in enough rooms, some young lady would look at you as if you had recently parted the red sea.

That’s what happened to me with Josephine Splatter, whose eyes shone at me as I made a series of statements, which I realise in hindsight, would have failed to get into a pack of Fortune Cookies. To add to the glory of the moment she became so enamoured with my inner gifts that she invited me for the weekend at her parents dwelling, complete with sixteen bedrooms and twenty- two bathrooms, presumably built in case any of the couples were recovering from some invigorating argument or other. On this occasion it was just me and her parents. Her mother, also called Josephine and her dad Ned Splatter who’d made a pile or ten from something to do with cement.

Mr Splatter didn’t seem interested in the relationship between Green or Yellow, or my observation that “Clouds pass like memories over the  verdant fields,” Nothing was said exactly, until he mentioned during the evening meal that”Would I like to help Mario,” the waiter at their table “With clearing the plates away,” and staring directly at me, as if I’d stolen his shirt, which I thought was a bit rich given that it was only his daughter I wanted.

The next morning at breakfast when I sat down he gave me another stare and said, “I hope you are keeping your eye on the train times in case you decide to leave early,” and although I presumed at the time that this must have been a joke, the delivery was strangely lacking in humour. I’d popped along the hundred yards over to Josephine’s bedroom at the end of the previous evening to say goodnight but found the door barred by some guy who was built like a dumpster truck, and seemed about as friendly as one: something in his manner suggested that normal courtesies could be dispensed with.

When I said at breakfast, “the truth will brook no dissembling” Mr Splatter looked at me and said, “The truth is used as a garnish to make the weak feel better: period”. OK, a hint of profundity here: perhaps I was making a bit of an impression on Mr Splatter, and I grinned at my newly discovered fellow mystic. Both mother and daughter seemed uncomfortably quiet and the reason for this became clearer as I left the breakfast room to see my packed suitcase adjacent to the front door. Mr Dumpster Truck was standing beside it.

The girls seemed to have melted from the company and the Nedster came up to me and said, “Get in the car and leave, and if I hear you’ve spoken to my daughter again you will become ill” “Is bravery a quality or an affectation?” I asked myself as his eyes bored into mine. It was a question I sought to answer during the ride to the station.

I never spoke to Josephine again, and the next term I saw her climbing into a Lamborghini with the door held open by some literal materialist who clearly couldn’t tell a Fortune Cookie from a Christmas Cracker. Later, as I forged a career expressing my wisdoms for the greeting card industry, I remembered her and wondered if I should have fought harder to rescue her from a life of stultifying prosperity.

About Peter Wells aka Countingducks

Trying to remember what my future is
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16 Responses to A Weekend With The Powerful

  1. catterel says:

    Another jewel from the mysterious mines of your imagination – or genuine memory? ;.D


  2. mimijk says:



  3. Simply wonderful! Im in awe, I just dont know how you do it! 😊


  4. An excellent little tale, Peter. I love the way in which you take a small incident or moment and breathe life into it. Every time I read one of your shorts I find myself living out the scene. Great writing!


  5. Morgan says:

    Magnificent 🙂


  6. renxkyoko says:

    That was great, Peter Wells. I found it funny, at least the main’s character’s obliviousness.. But I felt I shouldn’t laugh. Is it wrong to think this is humurous?


  7. As George Vaillant once said, It is not stress that kills us. It is effective adaptation to stress that allows us to live. Hmmm….


  8. You strike the perfect balance of weaving in so much vivid detail but not to a point where it disrupts the flow of the story. This was truly amusing and quite a wild ride. Maybe it’s a good thing he didn’t pursue Josephine further. Being that her father’s last name is Splatter and he works with cement, I believe our guy could easily disappear if he crossed the line!


  9. araneus1 says:

    I read this to my muse and she smiled.


  10. one word.
    SUPERB. xxxxxxx


  11. Not at all! Josephine deserved her hot wheels suitor and you deserved to live. Good riddance to pompous rubbish. Happy Father’s Day! 🙂


  12. nelle says:

    Good one… such a noble one, lamenting her tortured existence in a well endowed life.


  13. But, does any Father feel any man is good enough? : )
    I didn’t want it to end … a page turner.


  14. This one is really funny and clever. I enjoyed it both times I read it.


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